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your points make sense! Thx for your story author

Good work mate

great work

nice

plot twist

here's a power stone

honesty...great story

you deserve more powerstones.

Bro..

amazing creativity .

me*

nice improvement.

Now that I'm done complaining I'll offer solutions Writers block sucks my friend, I go through it at times. The best solution I've found is to read other novels with a similar genre to yours. this usually helps me get inspired with new ideas to add to my story. another suggestion I'd give is if you're going to write a character(herione) you're sure the audience wont like at first. Try to make her come off in a positive life. Otherwise she'll probably suck the life out of your story. Oh and this chapter was really hard to read , I literally started skipping paragraphs (wich is never a good sign). Please take out that last paragraph you wrote about the world being a story it'll kill your story and take out all those A.N and silly jokes, they're not helping anyone. If you're going to forshadow a story make it subtle and leave small hints in the story. Mystery is Fun to unriddle. Your story is amazing! and I've always enjoyed reading it ( until recently). Don't stress yourself too much , you'll get back in your zone soon. I Know it.