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ch 0 5 Life is Often Cliché
Anime & Comics · Rayos97
Cant wait for more!, the grammar is really good and the progression is fine, though i would like more world background. Its also a bummer that mc got only 10 marriage rings in the gacha and not 17, so i hope that he can get more in the gacha (you did not say that GOD made only 10 of those =P). I hope for Reynare, Ophis, Rias, Akeno, Koneko, Kuroka, Asia, Rossweisse, Xenovia, Irina, Ravel, Le Fey, Sona, Serafall, Yasaka, Kunou, and Ingvild. So he NEEDS another 7 Godly Marriage Rings. Lastly: I look forward reading your âdûlt chapters!!!!! Pls make them juicy
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Louise's mind seemed to wake up from its daze once her ears picked up that last comment, and, on instinct, her eyes travelled up. To her shock and surprise, there truly was a pair of thin, slightly curved red horns on top of the man's head. He wasn't human... And therefore... not a commoner.
Anime & Comics · Braggski
SO like this? i found this on google. It fits perfectly.
However, for the first time in her life... she didn't fail. She succeeded! She summoned a familiar! But... it... no, HE wasn't at all what she was expecting. In front of Louise stood a tall, young man of pale skin, black medium-length hair and athletic build. However, Louise didn't really look at his appearance, at all, she was far too captivated by two red rubies. The man's eyes told Louise all that she needed, this... was her familiar. The two crimson orbs should have sparked many flags inside her mind, but they didn't. Two black slits were acting as the man's pupils, and Louise had trouble looking anywhere but directly at him...
Anime & Comics · Braggski
Im very pleased that Jasmine is with Itachi, they would make an awesome couple and in the original Jasmine was my favorite. though i hope you save Xia Qingyue, no need to add her to the hârêm if you dont want to, but at least save her from her fate, She goes NUTS! NUTS!!!!! and its all was the plan of the goddess
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Anime & Comics · Wryyyyyyyy
Wow.. A kuroinu FF with actual plot! Im impressed... If only the grammar as better it would be perfect. I like the romance that's slowly developing but i kinda want more kisses/Hugs/Cuddling and the like between the dark elves and MC in a normal situation and openly, like Olga comes and sits on mc lap and kiss his cheek or something. Also Olga seems very interested in electronics which is surprising. I look forward to see what the author will have the mc make with nano bots and mana. Lastly, i agree with the other review that i want author to expand the world and fight demons and do more than just kill Vult and end it there
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