well the story development is to fast if author can make the development a more creative and in steady pace than this story can be very good and interesting I read first some chapter the story development the character development with each other characters just to fast I hope author can understand what I want tell
Fantasy · Zayn_Nicolas
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well the story development is to fast if author can make the development a more creative and in steady pace than this story can be very good and interesting I read first some chapter the story development the character development with each other characters just to fast I hope author can understand what I want tell
Yandere Instruction Manual
Fantasy · Zayn_Nicolas