Webnovel Author: Devil_Dragon785 - Novel Collection

so the start of the novel is one of the best I've seen till now. it hyped me too much and my expectations of further chapters shot off the roof but that's where the problem began. i am not saying that the novel is bad it's just that i would have liked the dialogues to be but better. it seems like to much drama for me when MC talks to the maid. and he just goes on spouting details even when no one asked. example(little bit spoiler but not much) when he goes to tailor sand beat his son what did he say when tailor asked him who he was he said that he did that to protect himself but kept on to saying " I came here to hire you lots to prepare more than a hundred sets of fine costumes for me, but who would’ve thought a few mad dogs would try to bite me at the gate?” now or is a good line but what i think he could have said" i came here to hire you people but who would have thought that since dogs would try to bite me" Why add the extra details like the number of clothes when no one asked you to, i think it could be better this simple way. This has happened more than once. i don't know about others but it feels a bit annoying to me.

i can try to keep up with other things but please give my boy his name back. It is dollar, not golden man. the translation is also a Little bit messed up but i can take it.

i really likes this book. it have very interesting story and the humour is also very good, though I can't say much about the character development yet

hlo author here so I am giving my own book less stars because of updating stability but I need some time before i fully focus on it. I hope u guys understand that and will continue to support me