Quality of writing is good, keeps the reader engaged and the language is simple to comprehend. Story development is excellent, the twists and surprises are really interesting. Characters have strong role. Overall the plot is going good, looking for more chapters and more interesting twists to come. Thank you.
Fantasy · Periloquis
Great start!! well organized thoughts and the plot is wonderful. Every single mention was keeping the reader engaged. 👍👌👏
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Quality of writing is good, keeps the reader engaged and the language is simple to comprehend. Story development is excellent, the twists and surprises are really interesting. Characters have strong role. Overall the plot is going good, looking for more chapters and more interesting twists to come. Thank you.
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Fantasy · Periloquis