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Fyniccus
male LV 13I'm not an English teacher, just a nineteen-year-old who likes to write.
2021-08-20 Joined United KingdomBadges 11
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Do you only know Shakespeare? Have you actually read any of his works? Your ignorance is insane,
"YOU!! YOU DEMON! YOUR EXISTENCE HAS DESECRATED THIS TOWN!! PERISH!!! WEEP!!! REPENT!!! APPEAR A MIRROR AFORE THE ANGUISH OF THOSE YOU ROBBED!!"
Mythology System in High School DxD
Anime & Comics · Fyniccus
Ah, yes, because using big, obtuse words equates to an essay. Also, I understand that you're a foreign reader, but before you comment on someone's use of language, the least you could do is check whether you spelt the word write correctly[img=recommend]
A church, a locale of platitudinous monochrome, earth petulantly profaned a universal stone listlessly sprawled afore myriad cannibalistic countenances, its body spasmodically blighted by tumorous oak pews, colouration of prosaic brown dissonantly stained an effulgent orange.
Mythology System in High School DxD
Anime & Comics · Fyniccus
Thanks for the compliment, I hope you continue to enjoy my novel.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: I’m sorry
Mythology System in High School DxD
Anime & Comics · Fyniccus
It's English. Maybe you could try and attain some fluency in it that surpasses that of a 4-year-old
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: I’m sorry
Mythology System in High School DxD
Anime & Comics · Fyniccus
Lol, thank you. Though I can't tell whether that's a compliment or a diss, to be honest!
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: I’m sorry
Mythology System in High School DxD
Anime & Comics · Fyniccus
No, every male is an F-rank, I think I explained it further in the chapter, but these two were the attendants of Areata and the other girl. As for why Eros didn't know about them prior to joining the class, that revolves around how he grew up in a singular room.
'Two? There are two males in Fiamma's class…I thought there'd be more.' Eros inwardly commented, his mind attempting to recall the faces that leered at his perpetually approaching form, his visage closely chased by Fiamma's sovereign figure, her eyes once more glistening with an impassioned contemptuous cavalier blaze, 'I don't think I've seen these two before, they must have already been someone's attendant before I joined the F-rank class,' yet, no matter how much the adolescent scoured his reticent stifled mind recognition of either face failed to appear.
Eros: The Forgotten God
Fantasy · Fyniccus
Thank you for the review!
No, it doesn't have Yuri. I hate it as well.
That will be explained later, but males can only be the apostle of heroes or demi-gods, anything higher is impossible, he's the apostle to one of those, so the school grants him a higher status.
Innumerable times in the past, the youth had received such offers, espers of varying ranks vying for his potential, however the academy, without fail, mutilated and maimed their hopes, for as an attendant, one's fate was sealed, their everything belonged to their master, their seed, their time, their life. To be selected as an attendant was a heaven-sent gift for an F-rank, a potential love customarily unfulfilled, a relationship dictated solely by their benefactor. Still, Eros bore little complaint with Fiamma's aristocratic commandment. Despite being an apostle, such a relationship appeared beneficial to Eros, for the youth wished to hide, to mask his life behind the cowl of an F-rank, to harvest the love of the beauties of the world, to attain their gift…to walk the path bestowed upon him by Psyche.
Eros: The Forgotten God
Fantasy · Fyniccus
It quite literally isn't. If he were to reveal his ability, which is from a god, something unseen before by a male, he would just be contained and treated like a threat or put to death. Plus he doesn't even know what being an apostle is so he'd rather hide it until he has proper knowledge.
Innumerable times in the past, the youth had received such offers, espers of varying ranks vying for his potential, however the academy, without fail, mutilated and maimed their hopes, for as an attendant, one's fate was sealed, their everything belonged to their master, their seed, their time, their life. To be selected as an attendant was a heaven-sent gift for an F-rank, a potential love customarily unfulfilled, a relationship dictated solely by their benefactor. Still, Eros bore little complaint with Fiamma's aristocratic commandment. Despite being an apostle, such a relationship appeared beneficial to Eros, for the youth wished to hide, to mask his life behind the cowl of an F-rank, to harvest the love of the beauties of the world, to attain their gift…to walk the path bestowed upon him by Psyche.
Eros: The Forgotten God
Fantasy · Fyniccus
Does that mean it's a good cliffhanger, or was it just poorly written?
ch 24 Chapter 24: Dress
Eros: The Forgotten God
Fantasy · Fyniccus
Yeah it is, sorry about that, at the time my brain just took the word for what it was. Ie: poly = many and I thought chromasia = colours. Thanks for pointing this out though, I'll edit the chapter when I have time.
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Eros: The Forgotten God
Fantasy · Fyniccus
Yeah, I'm starting to realise that. Thank's for reading
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: A boy named Eros
Eros: The Forgotten God
Fantasy · Fyniccus
No sorry, I later try to simplify the words so it might be difficult for the first few chapters
Placing one's hand upon the frigid door, Eros's muscles began to strain. The door was monolithic in nature, requiring every ounce of force the teen could muster just to crack it at the seams, yet, it was a feat he still managed to accomplish, for although draining, Eros had managed to free himself through the crevice he pried at which point he was greeted with the most conceited form superciliousness his mind could conjure, a hall decorated in the most pointlessly grandiose manner possible. With drab stone arched ceilings akin to that of a church, it lay gaudily adorned with masonry of gold; never happy with sporting but one trope, it had to be a whole cathedral in a corridor, multicoloured light stained the polished Bocote wood floor, dying it in its holy hue, for the source of such kaleidoscopic radiance originated from the ostentatious stained windows that sporadically clad the sides of such structure.
Eros: The Forgotten God
Fantasy · Fyniccus
The image isn't yours, with a single use of Google's reverse image search you can find the original source. I don't understand the point in lying about your situation.
ch 1014 Chapter 1014: Haruna's Stubbornness and Fear.
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Fantasy · Victor_Weismann