kironnnsgsb - Profile

This is the third attempt for you to make the same story and it seems that you've at least learned from your past mistakes. But still, it seems you need to learn more about making these Web novels. I really do hope you continue, I have never seen a such persistent author.

The chapters are getting good, and it seems you manage to give us the main point of the story and the action is straight up to the point, I like the shadow minion who is very smart enough to use the darkness around to reinforce their shadow.

Nice one, a Leveling MC so young that we readers quite understand why he doesn't get how the system worked at all, very hilarious concept and I've also already read it on the Webtoon about the Prologue that comes at the second chapter I guess but I think it is a good prologue to Introduce the Tiny Main Character.

KJVZeanso, I really appreciate that the story needs to be based on the MC, but still, I had some problems with it since the other characters are so barren. But still, you need to stop leveling up the MC More for now ...... Cause It seems the story is getting more barren for this so-called Main Plot.

The story is based on Time Traveling but I can feel this story will go on the multiverse or some sort which is quite great since you (Author) probably bluntly reveal that in the first chapter I believe or some sort by saying that is Timelines or whatever it is ... Still, if this character was meant to be OP, I really want to know how much since Leveling Characters are to be meant like that.

AUTHOR !!!! you really need to continue this Webnovel. This Webnovel is quite good since the character is very original and it seems you're from Indonesia which probably makes sense if your MC's name is Rangga.

I must say this is quite an entertaining Webnovel that balances harem and action I must say and the techniques are easy to catch on. The naming is quite good, especially the characters and I hope to see it more since these character naming are pretty rare.