AnimeLover0130

1mth

Replied to Velstad

Are there any unintended LotM references in it? Yes. Definetly. 😂

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Replied to Velstad

Finally, somone else has noticed. Told you Velstad. Now I'm just patiently wating for my fellow LotM fans.

ch 12 Dance of Ice

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Replied to Velstad

If I were a wizard, I wouldn't have to work for a gremlin like you.... but alas we are both penniless, and I'm not a wizard.

In Rokara's case, she probably received 'help'. No matter how much help they offer, you can never agree to their terms. The next thing you know is that you have fallen completely, and a block inside of a city is destroyed, with the hunters dispatched to take care of you."

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Replied to Velstad

See... that's what I meant.....

In Rokara's case, she probably received 'help'. No matter how much help they offer, you can never agree to their terms. The next thing you know is that you have fallen completely, and a block inside of a city is destroyed, with the hunters dispatched to take care of you."

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Replied to Velstad

Oi boss... guess my monthly payment gonna be cut again... right?

In Rokara's case, she probably received 'help'. No matter how much help they offer, you can never agree to their terms. The next thing you know is that you have fallen completely, and a block inside of a city is destroyed, with the hunters dispatched to take care of you."

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Commented

Just like beyonders, loosing control because of the ravings... Oh boy... Velstad gonna kill me for this...

In Rokara's case, she probably received 'help'. No matter how much help they offer, you can never agree to their terms. The next thing you know is that you have fallen completely, and a block inside of a city is destroyed, with the hunters dispatched to take care of you."

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Rats

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Posted

After about 40 chapters and the closure of a somewhat bigger event in the story, I decided to write a more serious review of the novel. First of all, the power system is interesting with all the unique gifts that the characters possess, especially the abilities of the MC that I'm most interested in, being all mysterious in some aspects, leaves some room for speculation and theory crafting. I like the world-building of the novel, it gives off a more gloomy, dark fantasy feeling, with the middle age setting and the persecution of the Gifted people. The characters and their interactions with each other so far are loveable, I like that, the author tries to show that not all hunters among their ranks are complete monsters or psychopaths. As for Talon, I like his type of character when it comes to an MC, being this street kid who is wronged by the world, running from his demons, but still refuses to give up and grabs every opportunity to be stronger just to spite everyone who hurt him and protect his friends. If I have to compare him to someone, I would say he has some similarities with Sunny from Shadow Slave. Overall a decent character. As for the writing quality, there are some typos here and there, but no major issues, and as I see it the author is working hard so that this story could be an enjoyable experience for the readers. In my opinion, I enjoy the story so far and I recommend giving it a try for those who are interested.

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Commented

Hmmm, I think the author wants to foreshadow something with this. Considering that Talon will be sent to Fort Eger soon, so the depiction of a one eyed, crazy soldier could point to Talon's future self, being broken by the war.

Behind him, within the church, the stained glass depicted a one-eyed soldier drenched in blood, his expression twisted into a maniacal grin.

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Commented

Talon done a Domain Expansion.

Both of them found themselves inside the dark hill, enveloped by red mist and surrounded by a seemingly endless sea of gravestones.

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Commented

I've got major Lord of Mysteries vibes from Quinn's display of abilities. It reminds me of a Sequence 9 Arbiter.

Enraged, Quinn began to shout with his eyes shining in an otherworldly red light, "Stop!"

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

2mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 Rats

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

4mth

Posted

Completely unbiased review. I'm definitely not writing this just to boost the rating of my good friend, Velstad's novel. Great novel, highly recommend it.

Everlasting Nightmare

Fantasy · Velstad

AnimeLover0130

6mth

Commented

After a few more exchanges, the gathering came to an end. The Sun, The Hanged Man, and Justice returned, while Klein remained in the gray fog, waiting for the sacrifice.

Lord of Mysteries

Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving

AnimeLover0130

1yr

Commented

Like the Fireball lvl0 of the two sisters, it was a passive, automatic, effortless skill. He had no idea how this foresight worked and he didn't care. What mattered was that it worked.

The Oracle Paths

Sci-fi · Arkinslize

AnimeLover0130

1yr

Commented

Quite a collection.

There were eighty two crystals inside the cabinet neatly lined in several rows. All of these were [Physical Crystals] containing abilities of Mutators he took along with some that came from powerful infected he managed to get their mutations. As for the [Mental Crystal] he was still keeping those inside the [PsyCrystal] since he was able to borrow the abilities stored in those crystals to some extent.