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3mth

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I always prefer a single set of power, but strong. Like Superman. Too many powers in a single bodu ruins the growth of the character.

And that would be enough for him to devise a way to implant these various mutant genes into the new body he was gonna create, but of course, it might take some time.

Marvel: I Need A New Body

Anime & Comics · Marveller

Pagla_Pro

5mth

Commented

Just a tip: People want to see loyal characters in a protagonist pirate crew, like Zorro. Not a morally uptight, righteous kind of guy. Even though the latter one is good for the world; in a fanfiction, loyality trumps every other thing.

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7mth

Replied to DaoistJ2BfOl

You just spoke my mind. Thank you.

ch 27 Unknown location: Ship. Part 2.

Star Wars: Darth Hassan

Movies · Vandalizer

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7mth

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It's getting hard to read. A sick twisted mc! Just kill her or leave her. He is not attracted to her. So why is he tagging her along? Just to torture her? Repititive actions ruin the story.

ch 27 Unknown location: Ship. Part 2.

Star Wars: Darth Hassan

Movies · Vandalizer

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9mth

Commented

Finally an author intelligent enough to pick Starkiller as SI.

Jake thought about it. He could pick Luke, Anakin, Revan, and Yoda. But as he thought he remembered Galen Marik. Marik, while not appearing in anything after the force unleashed games and tie-in media, showed he had enormous potential that was unexplored. His force potential alone seemed to rival Vader and Sidious . He made his choice, and God nodded. "As you wish." Jake was then consumed by a flash of light.

Reborn into Star Wars without a system

Movies · Wingzer0

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10mth

Commented

This Felicia plot seems too forced. Nate is becoming unlikeable every chapter. This fic is becoming too complex to keep track on. I'm out.

ch 100 Catfight

Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Anime & Comics · Draugzel

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10mth

Posted

I really like the way this fic is progressing. The writing quality is quite well imho. Hopefully this will be completed.

Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger

Anime & Comics · _oinkchan

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10mth

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Marvel: The Dark Spider

Anime & Comics · IRIS01

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11mth

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"I think I should explain in detail…" The woman said sharply as she flared her murderous aura. The woman took a deep breath to calm herself. "Let's start from the beginning… I am Hela Odinsdottir, the Asgardian Goddess of War and Death" The woman introduced herself…

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

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1yr

Posted

Finally a marvel fanfic with a unique concept and not an edgelord as a protagonist. Protagonist makes sensible choices. Really looking forward to the future chapters.

marvel's dictator

Movies · NoDress

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1yr

Posted

Really like the way you portrayed the MC. Really looking forward to the way he is gonna change Gotham.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

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1yr

Posted

Really entertaining fanfic. MC character development and portrayal is also good. Kudos!

Marvel God of Blood

Anime & Comics · Atrox_H

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1yr

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I don't understand why Tony is tolerating these types of questions from Nat. It is a clear indication that Nat still doesn't trust him fully. Without the sexual tension between them this feels like the Old Nat.

"Is it safe?" Natasha abruptly turned towards The Ancient One. "I am sorry Tony," She glanced at him, "but I want an opinion of someone with more experience in the Mystic Arts than a few months of self-study. So," She turned back towards Tao, "Is there a possibility of JARVIS going full Skynet on us?"