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From what few errors I saw, I think you'll have an easy time of editing, and always thanks for another amzing chapter leaving me wanting the next!

I am loving the diverse cast being built, and I am excited to see how Hoplite handles the discontent

I don't know how you make Michael feel so broken without saying it, but this was amazing

I was actually sad when I thought Michael was dead; then he was killed again

Rip and Tear, Until it is Done!!

I almost feel bad for the professional murderer. I also have to wonder how long elves live, given that the first one we meet says she'll live forever. you especially have to wonder just how old the ones with wrinkles are

What an incredible sense of loneliness and despair

The pace in this story has been great so far, and I like the way Lance is being shut down every time she tries her anime-girl act

Hoplite looks so much cooler than I had been thinking, and that detector in his finger was a nice touch

I cannot wait to see what becomes of this group

I am loving all these diverse creatures, the lesser fiends, the aliens in the first chapter, whatever the double body thing is. It's great

This is the exact kind of stuff I've been wanting to read for a long time, and I thank you for writing it

I am loving every chapter of this. The Hoplite's reaction to this situation is great, and I can't wait to find out what the elves think of him!

Another great chapter with good world-building. A little short given the epic that was the first chapter but enjoyable none-the-less

This is a fantastic beginning to a story, and the quality of the writing makes it all the better. I can't wait to read the rest!