Peter_Pumelig - Profile

The Story starts out quite interesting, and manages to hold the tension quite well. The Main Antagonist (Seth i think it was, the Snake from the start) has a reasonable motive in just his want for the Dungeon Core, and his reasonably slow approach, as well as the rescue through his Father who has to make Dealings with the Protagonist, and while tricking him, the Antagonists Father still gives off a feeling of Profesionalism. The only slight point of complaint i have are all the Girls he is surrounded with, while yes, it has a Harem Tag and most of the Girls have a reasonable exlanation for why they are more likely to be a girl for the role they need to fullfill, as in Vannessa having to appease Jason even meant in a sexual way. Though the dungeon sprite and the runic trainer less so. i like the Story overall and would really look forward to more Chapters

On a more serious note, the autor of the review has a point with the MC not smart a lot of times, i for myself did not have a that big problem with those things, for me the novel kind of ended with the MC gong insane and all, as it seems like hes basically gone now and his body completly controlled by that goddess, ant its like the end of a fairy tale, the goddes got her precious material and the MC is dead

Its a great start, and the future of it is really promising, i really like the novel, and hope that it will continue on with as much quality as now

I find this novel amusing, i cant really tell about character developement or real story progression at this point, but it is a fun read, for whenever you have time

Ive read the first few chapters, and the story is great, but i fell like i know too much ybout the lore of LOL to enjoy this novel, especially bringing in a girl called Misha, is like inviting trouble, especially when Aatrox or Zoe ever apear in that story, or the thing with Shyvanna, i understand that the story changes a few things, but turning a half dragon in a beautiful lady seems kinda off, especially regarding the amount of realism Yummi, Rek'sai and Garen got. And its already kinda setting bad flags incase Lux should ever become part of the story