CerealKiller - Profile

I like the 2 different protagonists, not something I’ve seen before much, especially in apocalyptic novels I like that there is little grammatical errors I like the character development, first few chapters were exceptional I like the world background, 10 different worlds to write about sounds like a handful but I definitely hope to see you pull it off I like the update stability, around 14 a week is optimal Hoping to see more heroines that can hear is thoughts and use it in unique ways, although Aria is a a amazing character, the way she uses his thoughts is kinda bland. Hoping to see Elise and Rin falling in love, it would be kinda awkward to have to different protagaimsts going on different paths Although there hasn’t been,a completely lewd scene, the ones that are available now are definitely not disappointing Some referemce images for the main characters would definitely help with the immersion in the story This novel has tones of potential and I hope that you continue to write, your definitely a good author Merry Christmas btw

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