Webnovel Author: Apoqliphoth - Novel Collection

So far, the story seems really interesting, with two other settings that have as much potential as the current one (I'm looking at you, Beast Planet). The writing quality could be improved, but there's no major problem. It's perfectly readable and fluid in a sense. I'd definitely recommend giving it a chance for any indecisive new reader. Try it!

Aeden and Megissa are the main characters, but the story's first half revolves heavily around the Male Lead. As for who has the most significant part, I'd say they're pretty equal. Each one will have his role and importance at some point. I hope you'll enjoy reading it! Please don't hesitate to comment your thoughts on each chapter :).

I really love how fleshed out the world is. The author is doing it at his own pace, gradually building up interesting details, places and factions for an anticipated (I hope) showdown. There are some issues with the writing flow in certain chapters, but they're easily ignored and aren't that bothersome. I haven't read many novels that combine sci-fi elements with fantasy ones (like magic), so it was definitely a surprise for me. All in all, it was an excellent read. I highly recommend it!

While not something I would typically read, I can appreciate the author's writing quality and his work's depth (up to chapter 4, where I stopped). The format itself is quite interesting as it sometimes reads like a script, much to my initial confusion while perusing my way through. All in all, I wish the author a good continuation. If you're a fan of this genre, absolutely do not hesitate to give it a go.

Traditions need to be kept, and since I have confidence in my writing, I'll give myself a shameless full score review. This is my first serious work. As such, I hope you'll follow me as I weave thread by thread the world I imagined. If you've just started reading my book, you must know that I'm incredibly fond of foreshadowing. Thus, however small or "filler" it may seem, every detail will be relevant sooner or later. Naturally, don't hesitate to drop a review! It helps me develop and improve my skills while also motivating me to publish more. With that said, please have a good read!

Though the structure, grammar and general flow of the story can get awkward at times, the author has clearly put effort into fleshing out the main character and overall world background. It's usually rare, but I found myself actually finding the characterization quite realistic and natural, while the writing quality itself picks up the deeper you get into the story. The surrounding lore also has me hooked, since I'm not that familiar with Eastern Fantasies, everything feels like a breath of fresh air. Definitely adding this one to my library!

That old man was hilarious, too bad he went away too soon. This is my first taste of Eastern Fantasy, and while it's confusing at points, the author's writing style and descriptive abilities make it more enthralling and somewhat very enjoyable. The premise is strong and the story has great potential, I'll be waiting hungrily for more updates. Definitely give it a try!

I'm actually quite enthralled with this. Going through the first chapters, what attracted me most were the author's descriptive abilities. It's as if I could hear the various sound effects, in this case, it's a shining example of onomatopoeia used right. Also, I'm in love with the way the Neo System Announcements are structured as well as the aliens' seemingly trolling personalities. It somehow reminds me of the Experimental Log of the Crazy Lich, so if you've liked that novel, please give this one a read!

Definitely one of my favourite recent reads. The story is just unfolding and we're getting through it with the lovely (and somewhat hilarious) interactions of Rambone and Luca. I have the feeling that it's only going to get better with time and more releases, so I'll for sure add it to my library. For anyone reading this review, give this book a try! You won't be disappointed.

I love everything about this. Enthralling protagonist? Check. (love Rena & Roma) Excellent writing quality? Check. (I'm actually taking notes) Amazing plot and setup? Check. (I love Shokugeki no Soma and if you liked it, you should definitely give this book a try!) Eagerness to read more? CHECK. I just want you to mass release at this point, it definitely has the feels (and somewhat the structure) of a Light Novel and the inspiration shows. Honestly, if I could vote right now, I'd have given you my Power Stones. Definitely adding this to my library!

So far, 20 chapters in and I can somewhat see the full picture. The author knows where he's going with the story, has clearly established characters with fleshed-out psyche and it shows. The world is given meaningful attention with certain respect to the (Japanese?) setting and I like the level of details. However, the one thing that unfortunately managed to bother me is the writing. The ideas are there, abundant and ready for use, yet they're merged together in incoherent, albeit readable, blocks of texts. A little advice would be some focus on the process of writing itself, especially the punctuation. Shortening sentences while getting rid of incohesive expressions would do wonders for the book. As it stands, it has great potential and I'm looking forward to the author's improvement in the future.

I'm not familiar with Cultivation novels so it might've worked in favor of yours, but I quite like the concept for now. You've been slowly fleshing out the world while developing the characters in a most interesting way, which is why the score given is high. However, working on the writing itself is a must since it's all over the place. In this case, perhaps finding an editor or someone to proofread might help. Anyhow, it was a great read and I enjoyed most of it. Looking forward to the next chapters!