I really don't like it very much it is too focused in the potential af the pokemon and less in the story and the adventure that it's what I expected being a pokemon fic also it has too much explanation, although know is nescesary it must have a balance so as to no become too tedious also it doesn't have a good coherence in the phrasing and the writing but it's easy to adapt. If yo can overlook this things then its not a bad story just not for my taste.
Anime & Comics · alex02373
It's a good story, the grammar is good, I agree that the phrasing is a little bit weird and you may confuse with who is talking but it's easy to adapt and the ending is a bit rushed in my opinion. Besides all that I think is one of the best fics especially the humor, it really translate the escence of the comedic situations in One Piece
Anime & Comics · Monkey_Godking
This is an amazing story great writing quality the only bad thing in my point of view is that there is a lot of technical stuff but if you can put up to that then in one of the best pics of HP that I've read
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I really don't like it very much it is too focused in the potential af the pokemon and less in the story and the adventure that it's what I expected being a pokemon fic also it has too much explanation, although know is nescesary it must have a balance so as to no become too tedious also it doesn't have a good coherence in the phrasing and the writing but it's easy to adapt. If yo can overlook this things then its not a bad story just not for my taste.
Pokemon: Master of tactics
Anime & Comics · alex02373