good read, just need to be edited. it alot of unnecessary words in some of the sentences.
ch 53 Rumor about President Lu Xun
Urban · zetsubouaichan
this chapter needs to be edited
ch 0 1 Betrayal *
Urban · PurpleLight
please bring back the person who was editing the chapters before. the new editor is not doing a good job. it's too many grammatical errors in the chapters and sometimes the sentences don't flow correctly. I really like this novel but I think I'm going to drop it if this continues.
ch 983 xu family produces a fierce woman, wanwan who is dumbfounded (3)
Urban · Yuechu Jiaojiao
I really like this novel but please proofread the chapters before posting. Too many grammar problems. If you need help, I can help you or you can get an editor.
ch 882 the sixth master, clean and swift moves
Urban · Yuechu Jiaojiao
please edit the following chapters. too many grammar problems
ch 858 the sixth master's long-lost sister? the most outstanding third master fu
Urban · Yuechu Jiaojiao
please edit this chapter too many grammar problems
ch 854 the hot-tempered young master xu broke into the enemy's base?
Urban · Yuechu Jiaojiao
the book is good but you really need an editor. If you want, I can help you.
It was still very early when Si Mi arrived home. It wasn't even 5 am. The weather was really good. The flowers in Fu Zhen's side garden were also well taken care of. The fresh flowers matched the warmth of the setting sun. Si Mi stood in the garden with her long hair fluttering in the wind and her graceful figure. What a beautiful scene! Butler Sun and the kitchen staff came back from buying vegetables and saw this scene!
Urban · Mountain Springs
I mean she can always get on top
"If you marry me, you'll... never have children for the rest of your life."
Urban · Mu Kong
please edit the chapters. the book is good but too many grammar errors.
Lee Xuiye was very annoyed. However, she knew that if she didn't avoid this situation, then Mo Lingtan would use his tricks and took her with him in the banquet.
Urban · Dlchelwani
chapters are too short. please make them longer...thanks in advance [img=recommend]
ch 621 Flying Robber, Fierce Beauty (2)
Urban · Yuechu Jiaojiao
why are the length of the chapters so short lately???
ch 601 Third Master and Wanwan Join Forces: He Wants Her Life, so She Has to Die (1)
Urban · Yuechu Jiaojiao
I have a feeling I'm not going to like where the book is going. I feel the amnesia arc is really unnecessary especially after the miscarriage. He is suppose to pretend to be her husband while mourning the lost of his child. Author I really like your style of writing and I really like the book so far but I don't know if I will continue with this.
ch 694 My Love Rival
Urban · XiaoMeeHee
the lack of updates is annoying at this point
Master's Untamed Wife
Urban · XiaoMeeHee