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Author I have a question. You are saying that the mc has developed loyalty towards momonga and others but what I want to know is if he will blindly follow their orders. Also will he be completely serving to them as I would like the mc to have his independent thought process not just the ones given to him by the system and momonga.

I know this might sound ridiculous but I was thinking you could give him itto Shura or something similar to that. I know it sounds illogical but if he gets stuck in a perilous situation then it will be a trump card he can use. I was thinking that you can take the principles behind itto Shura and make changes by adding the wind element to it. I was thinking of increasing his speed by 20 - 40 % for 3 or 5 minutes and it will also add effectts such as bleeding, peircing, also it can increase sharpness while increasing his physical strength by 15% for 5 minute. The drawbacks are that he will be exhausted for half or a full day and it can only be used once a day if he masters it then it can be used upto twice a day of course the side effects will be bad. He will have to have a very strong physique not to mention extreme and precise control over his strength, speed and chakra. That's all I had to say. It's your decision in the. End

I think for his second spirit ring you can use benimaru ( fire force ) abilities. 2nd spirit ring abilities are igniting and controlling his own flames and manipulate flames from external sources. I believe it will be a good one as with igniting he can control when and whether he wants the flames to explode or not and make it a surprise attack. Controlling flames is a must as it will necessarily grant him fire manipulation which will help him a lot to make his own spirit skills. Finally the ability to control flames from external sources will give him a huge variety of options, surprises with which he can even manipulation the flames if others be it from the nature or from martial soul.

In synopsis he mentioned that he had Dr geros memories and dr gero is a master at biomechanics. So yes he is going to turn himself into an Android or cyborg.

Now that I think about it there is another reason why you have him use puppets. In the anime sasori turned himself into living puppet. So maybe you're planning to make the mc use puppetry to study inside his body. But as I said medical jutsus is better. Well it is your story so we will see how it progresses. But another thing is in the synopsis you mentioned he would improve himself by upgrading his body so maybe the puppetry is for that but you should probably make him a bit stronger currently.

Earth affinity huh interesting choice but are you really sure about this. Ii mean you could have given him lightning even though it may be cliche or you could have given him both water and earth as even though the hashirama cell transplant failed it would still be a good excuse to use with enhanced regeneration and I mean regeneration which recovers both physical and spiritual means. Or you could have given him a strudy body and high chakra reserve. Well this are just my opinions. I will wait and read how this story progresses. For now the story is really good with a well thought out story line and good writing.

There's also TBATE , Naruto , one piece, second life ranker, MHA, BTTH, Douluo, harry Potter, ATG, KNY ,Hellsing and many many more.

I believe highschool DXD will be a good place. Not for the women. In DXD you should maybe only make 1 or 2 as his lovers because it's used way too much. The reason I'm saying is because of sacred gears, bloodlines, techniques, skill, abilities, shadow servants, artifacts and many more. DXD is one hella broken and op universe if you ignore the fan service and look deeply into lore. I mean issei even with his plot or luck couldn't have become so strong if it was for draig. So yeah steal, conquer, take all the sacred gears, techniques, shadow servants and artifacts.

Why not the main heroine of solo leveling the s rank hunter with blonde hair I forgot her name. I know it's cliche but hey they make a great couple not to mention she is a brave woman and likes to improve herself.