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This is a really good book! It was really fun to read and had an amazing plot! There should be other books similar to this one, but none of them can even come close to being as good as this one. I just really wish more chapters were free to read but other than that, I highly recommend reading this.

For the writing quality, it was really good. I didn't notice any errors but that was probably because I wasn't really looking for them. I haven't checked this book long enough to see the stability of updates, so I'm giving it a 3. The story development is really good, but I think it can improve a bit more. For the character design, I think you can describe it in a little more detail to get an image of how the characters look. Lastly, you didn't give much for the world background, so I couldn't really give more than 2 stars. This is my first time writing a review, so I am sorry for all the criticism I wrote or if I may have offended you at any point. The story you wrote is really good and I can't wait till you update more.