DaoistiaLT73 - Profile

It's like having a bad dream, upon waking up you found out you are in another world It's really a bad dream

The story is developing at slow phase to appetize the reader for the unexpected

Blending reality with supposed fantasy.

Not bad for the unexpected change, unfolding the next plot. Good

Not bad for a start.

Welcome back from the dream land

Storm before Calmness

In front of Strength weaklings should tuck their tails

good job

I read it somewhere and agreed that "those who knows find it easy and those who don't know find it hard" this is appropriate here.

Drawing parallel from inferences ... was a language I learnt from this Story. It made sense. looking from this perspective Ye Yuan should be able to come out victorious. The situation is predictable....lol

Power Base foundation in progress, that's good 👍

Many realistic secrets of life. Keep your own counsel, never place your fate on another, knowledge is wealth, those who knows find it easy, and so on. The Story is great treasure when no word escape your sight to draw parallel from inferences. You see why I appreciate your work Author me...

I knew it. How could it be possible to get treasures easily and also given the opportunity to escape calamity. Let's see how it unfold. Great job pal

Since it's madness to enter the thought of another person, I will not be dueling on why but what ... Great job

why should I complain when I'm a visitor in your Abode You dictate the rules just make sure you provide enough memento ...lol

we are living in the world created by the Author so he dictate the rules .. hahaha

Good. let's move on

You are appreciated 👍

it's too early to make judgement. the story is unfolding brilliantly