Idolo tu historia tiene muchisimo potencial espero seguir leyendo. Un capricho de gusto personal no es necesario que escribas o describas todo el glosario que realizaste antes de publicar el capitulo de entrada seria mejor ir a la accion. En fin es solo una opinion es tu historia al fin y al cabo espero que no la dejes. Un abrazo
ch 0 5 The Demon and the Daimyo
Anime & Comics · Guionista
bro rereading your story and comparing it to the manga currently. It's scary and goosebumps how you hit things like the level 5 buster call the secret of alabasta among many things. You have true manga predictability. This is the best fan work I have read and will read about the world of One Piece without a doubt.
ch 145 A miracle! Alabasta Sky Island!
Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
bro really delete it. In many chapters you can see that the fic itself sucked your balls. You basically divided into 2 things, I'm too broken but meh and I'll do it later. no one expects a tolkien play here but at least some love for your own work. On the other hand, it is noticeable that you did not like this work at first since I was reading your story of the god of the forge and it is a 9/10 so far I will be totally aware of that work of yours
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Muy buena historia bro. Empezo de forma exelente pero en los ultimos 10 cap el prota desaparecio para volverse un copy page del guion de cap america. Seguro no me haces caso pero de igual manera lo pondre por favor pon mas interacciones del peotagonista. De memoroa sabemos que sucedio en cap america y para la gente que no lo sabe ni idea de que hace leyendo un fic de marvel
ch 34 [World War II] - Captain America - The End
Movies · AidenUsmani
bro as long as you don't use things like 0800 year dog xianxia calendar or misspell character names like some translators do for my ok
ch 0 1 Villain want to retire from engagement
Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
great chapter bro. I would like to recommend that you aim for more interaction or dialogues between characters or different points of view where there are conversations... that way you will get more comments, sometimes the information dumps are bad
ch 18 CHAPTER 18 Women Too Many Women
TV · GodOfGreedAs
an idea for yamato's full beast form. author-sama
ch 240 Chapter 240 - Aftermath 01!
One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague