Webnovel Author: Revered_Immortal - Novel Collection

Hi everyone Author here , well this book I am writing just as a pastime and I hope you will like it. Yeah it's my first book so don't expect much and about R-18 there will be tons of it and there will be yuri and some futa as well so if you don't like them you can skip those chapters as , I am thinking of writing a sensible story. And I sincerely hope you will like it and if you have any suggestions feel free to share.[img=recommend]

Hi guys author here if you have any questions ask me , I will try my best to answer.

Author San please continue the Apocalypse one , it was a good one . Please, continue that one and your new novel is good too, Good work , keep it up.

Hi bro , first of all You have done a great job 👏 in the writing , I wanted to ask a few things first will there be a harem , and please make mc a sigma not Beta.

Author San you disappoint me, why does mc accepts to be a servant to that bitch morarity , you said he will rule , so does he becomes the ruler of servants of morarity family . Atleast show something good not mc becoming a dog to a bitch, and does mc gets a harem because I want tk see a Harem ( Please )

It's trash All this feminism shit should just go to hell, and Author should also stop writing, if he can only produce such trash then he got no right to be a Author, Woman dominated world wtf , at least there should be some badass mc not a simp who goes around saying shit like I don't hit woman , come on bro , woman should be respected , but shit like this should go to hell, If I was in mc s place when he was captured I would have killed those bitches without batting an eye , this is trash don't read it .

Author , why are you making the super OP ability of mc look like trash , you know with the power of sun which is a star there are endless possibilities like , MC can create black holes by making stars collapse, he can even make white holes for teleportation , he can even make a super nova , he ca even make a miniature universe of his by making a big bang through his sun, this does not even include the basic attacks which he does , so please make him more OP . This novel had a lot of potential and here are a bit of character improvement suggestion , please make MC a bit more badass and ruthless, and this is my personal feeling but I HATE THAT BITCH SERENA JUST FUCKING KILL HER(NO OFFENSE ).I hope you will take my suggestion seriously, this novel has a lot of potential so THANKYOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK.

Author , why are you making the super OP ability of mc look like trash , you know with the power of sun which is a star there are endless possibilities like , MC can create black holes by making stars collapse, he can even make white holes for teleportation , he can even make a super nova , he ca even make a miniature universe of his by making a big bang through his sun, this does not even include the basic attacks which he does , so please make him more OP . This novel had a lot of potential and here are a bit of character improvement suggestion , please make MC a bit more badass and ruthless, and this is my personal feeling but I HATE THAT BITCH SERENA JUST FUCKING KILL HER(NO OFFENSE ).I hope you will take my suggestion seriously, this novel has a lot of potential so THANKYOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK.

It's just neither good nor bad it's between them, you know this story is annoying me very greatly , author made mc a cold hatred person and starting chapters feels like sh** that part about the training , it gives me a feel that author is a sadist who likes to torture people, (PLEASE DON'T TAKE THIS TO HEART , NO OFFENSE.)