Webnovel Author: GreatMageHarkan - Fanfic&Novel Collection

This is based on a chinese novel, in chinese culture as well as some other cultures, like my culture, Brazil, it's very common to call people as brothers, uncles, aunts, etc, so long as there is some level of intimacy.

it's brother in the same sense as when you call a close friend 'bro'

So, having finished the first chapter, the thing that irks me is grammar, there are many easy mistakes easy to be fixed, mostly related to past tense. But the premise of the story is good, I feel it has potential. If you need an editor, give me a call either here or on Facebook. I can make your 'baby' easier to read for an English-speaking audience, I'm not the best at this kind of thing, but people generally praise my grammar in the many novels I've written over the years. Anyway, good luck.

it took me almost an hour to find something that barely felt similar, to be honest with you, anime style character can only go so far in terms of appearance if you don't make a commission to some artist. But basically, just imagine a shorter haircut and a more, actually, a less artificial face with stubbles around he mouth and jawlines. My character doesn't look like a chad, but he sure does looks more like a man than anime characters usually look like.

Well, sorry if I end up passing a wrong idea with the pic and synopsis, I added an observation there. If you like the story, do stay to read more... it might not be what you wanted but you might like it in the end, either way, thanks for telling of the issue...

She is one of the main characters, yes, why? The protagonist though is Leofric, he is the lens through which the story is told and developed.

But... it isn't wrong though...

his magic is not of this world after all, it has no biologic properties whatsoever nor any similarity to the system practiced in this world, it's a purely exoteric way of doing magic wich relies only on knowledge. It's not to meant to fit in this world, it's purely for fun.