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it's a good AU Harrypotter one of the best in AU type where potters are alive.keep updating its getting interesting and better with new chapters .

here you go another good story but well just don't abandon all the stories at mid because it's what happens when you are writing multiplie stories always loved your stories

excellent work good development of oc for someone who has reincarnation immortality as its good to see them do anything they want on wimp without too much care as shown in some other fics with just logic been serzech is as powerful as shiva and mc can't beat ultimate class because they want a shitty plot its much better to se a op mc behave live himself not some shitty plot correction bit*h

at first i thought it would be a mtl rip-off but i didn't expect it to be such a good story with so many plot change possibility its just addicting to read as for those who think that its not good or world setting is not well-made, well anything can happen in marvel so instead of leaving a bad review just don't read it and for the idiot who was saying its harem with no plot b*tch read more now it has a good steady plot than many other pokemon harem fic..

i mean what is this it's not readable at all and I read mtl all the time but its harder than those its so f ed up so many plot holes and unnecessary changes and if you want to show politics as all other who make mc a villain please know how to write that stuff the way you wrote it is like a kids play imitating politics I mean at least see if your story structure is coming together it could have been so easily be countered if you used some more open approach for many things like the system can do so much but you make it so mc didn't use it to its potential.

Just the right way to make a marvel fic not some vanilla shit destroying common sense because some shits can't handle the reality best thing close to human nature if given power..well now i dont even have enough powerstones to vote each of your fics so gonna vote for the one you are updating.

overpowered politics for fun are the best combination its like i wanna be the king and no one will refuse but where's the fun...slowly creating a dark and twisted yet enjoyable character its just the best and this book is way more intense then the other ones its fun to see different styles from one author its shows your talent keep it up....

well what can i say i read the previous version also and this has now became a masterpiece it perfectly represents that how a normal human may react to infinite power and no morals to stop him its a great work in my eyes and I love it more and more as I read it