to be honest i loved the storyline it's just pay attention to your punctuations then a bit grammatical errors u can increase your vocabulary and write more kind of new words understanding me ? still it was good as for first book i will be waiting for ur updates u have not update recently please update regularly [img=recommend]
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to be honest i loved the storyline it's just pay attention to your punctuations then a bit grammatical errors u can increase your vocabulary and write more kind of new words understanding me ? still it was good as for first book i will be waiting for ur updates u have not update recently please update regularly [img=recommend]
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