rice_chan

3mth

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The writting quality rises exponentially from the 1st to 2nd chapter, the author is adapting really well to criticism, I like the story building however im a bit confused on some things, ive read ahead on the patreon and the mc has sunshine but is also death??? y 2 powers why not just sunshine, the world is an oc world with diff type of anime powers and power from games and movies, really refreshign stuff

Mythological Legacy

Anime & Comics · DiBltzy

rice_chan

1yr

Commented

HE's BACK. HE"s BAAACK

ch 0 1 Prolouge

Bleach: Sternritter's Wrath

Anime & Comics · Revamping12345

rice_chan

2yr

Commented

I knew u was a promising author from the first chapter I am more impressed with your writing skills so keep on going and now u can count me in as a fulltime reader

ch 0 2 Chapter 1- The Escape

Tales Of The Wellermen

Fantasy · OldManMarcus

rice_chan

2yr

Commented

That was a nice chapter when u started the story and talk about the ocean I almost felt like I was there u seem like a very promising author I will make sure to read more

ch 0 1 Prologue

Tales Of The Wellermen

Fantasy · OldManMarcus

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