Jinsoku_2348

1yr

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Awieee.. . so excited for her. More time for her in this please.

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Dark Lords: A Noblesse Sequel

Fantasy · Daeleon

Jinsoku_2348

1yr

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yes, these guys

As the driver and his passenger alighted, they took off their helmets. One has orange hair, and the other had hair which was brown and long. It was Han Shinwoo, and Woo-Ikhan.

Dark Lords: A Noblesse Sequel

Fantasy · Daeleon

Jinsoku_2348

1yr

Replied to Jinsoku_2348

also. erebus or erebos is a primordial deity in Greek Mythology .I guess we could expect a lot from this guy .

"I cannot believe this—" said Aldric Erebus di Creed, clenching his fist.

Though the author said that hes doing this to help him with his writing block .this is actually well done. Unlike other fan fiction or non cannon sequel authors who can't even use the proper punctuation. also, the story development is just cool. though the chapters are short, it took 5 chapters to go for the main plot while giving hints on the first four ,without revealing too much. fan fiction authors nowadays spoon feed you with information that it gets boring later on. also, the author managed to keep the original characters ' attitude. like Yuna, she's the only one to apologize . Shinwoo is still noisy, and Ikhan is still a weakling. then we have a new character. Hana is the name, and it seems she's the gf of our Ikhan. I wonder why the author decided to do that? 🤔 I would ask that you use shinwoo and the others because they're a great addition to the story.