personally would keep the talismans but ditch the oni mask past being a medium to absorb them into his body. I am enjoying the story and think that it should stay as a crossover like you have it. the only change past the mask I would do is maybe tone down the yandere side of Mikaela. those parts are a little cringe for me. but hey. it's your story. whatever you do or don't is up to you. just hope that you keep writing.
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I would say keep this story but rewrite if your not satisfied with how it has turned out so far
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TV · Darpan_Biswas
where???
I like it. but Selene was the Roman goddes of the moon. Artemis was the Greek. I think. 😁
After three weeks and a quick trip to Diagon to get supplies, It's finally time to go to Hogwarts. During those weeks I owled Barrat and had him alter my investment plan. Barrat is now adding Marvel companies like Stark industries to my portfolio. I also bought Hedwig, but named her Selene instead, after the Greek goddess of the moon. I also bought a very expensive school trunk that has an entire apartment in it. Including a library, working sinks, and bathrooms, etc, so until I get permission for Adele (Author: Her name is losing an L because autocorrect is annoying me) to be in the school she will stay there.
Book&Literature · AlienWarlord
I may be misunderstanding something so please correct me if I'm wrong. he was wearing weighted clothing in the HTC. with "I think" the gravity upped to 10x normal. why would the weighted clothing hinder him that much outside of the HTC with normal gravity.
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Anime & Comics · HolyGambler