Manage your pronounce correctly, and don't add another whole info about their looks.
ch 25 Chapter 6.2 - Lessons
Fantasy 路 Darkness_Enjoyer
He needs a smartphone to solve 7 years child questions papers馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃槀馃憤
ch 0 1 Warn A Brother
Movies 路 BarCalak
Ranking names of the mages need to be simple or easy to pronounce, so readers can remember it. And this chapter sort of feels like a monologue to me which wouldn't draw readers into novel story or world. You can take it as a advice or ignore it, its your novel anyway.
ch 0 1 Roman Trambelio
Anime & Comics 路 Dreizehnn
Why does it look like I'm reading a cringe Chinese novel, after reading this chapter
ch 54 Chapter 54: Savage Axel Strikes again
Book&Literature 路 Snollygoster
You are making him lose his character
ch 33 Chapter 33: Daphne's Problem
Book&Literature 路 Snollygoster
Any suggestions on which pokeball he should use? I will change it after doing appropriate research on Pokeballs 馃憤馃嵑
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Anime & Comics 路 Abhi_th_Smasher
thanks for pointing it out 馃憤馃嵑
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Anime & Comics 路 Abhi_th_Smasher
i have only watched Pokemon anime of Kanto reign when I was a kid and haven't played any of its games so i don't even know there was level system in it until yesterday and i thought it was all fanfic think so i made it up as i see fit as you can see in this chapter 馃槄馃槄
ch 0 7 CHAPTER 5
Anime & Comics 路 Abhi_th_Smasher
If you find any problem please do tell , so that I correct it 馃憤馃嵑
ch 0 7 CHAPTER 5
Anime & Comics 路 Abhi_th_Smasher
Don't know, i just searched it on Google and copied it
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Anime & Comics 路 Abhi_th_Smasher
done 馃憤 thanks for pointing it out馃嵑
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Anime & Comics 路 Abhi_th_Smasher
I don't usually give any novels 5 stars but this one deserves it and has promising future. .... ..................... ...................... ....................
Creating Heavenly Laws
Anime & Comics 路 Lordanos_80