Atikar - Profile

Kenjutsu is okay just very bland. There is no cultivation so that is good. I do like bikujutsu.

In terms of skill

Some of this stuff was explained like the compensation is not for him specifically but for the all the orphans who lost their parents in the war and for the system I think that having a very op system just gets boring and when the becomes op I just do not care about their growth cause they are already op. Just them insulting people and causing trouble or going into hiding for some years and reappearing to cause more trouble. But also I get why you do not like some stuff like dungeon and system. I personally do not mind they are just there but I get it. I honestly think the mc is growing at an okay rate maybe a little bit too fast.

I like the story I just do not like the wives think especially the age gap and the way he planned it I am also not a fan of harem. I get that people like this stuff but not for me. I also think that having mc getting all those wives is kind of forced it seems like these wives have no dignity making me think lower of them and the only reason they are relevant is because the mc likes them I feel like it takes away all that they have worked for in the canon and makes them useless simps who are only strong cuz mc has to have strong wives. I also prefer a more steady growth where the mc becomes strong but not as fast. Maybe a few steps faster the Kakashi and then the major changes in strength come when older or during war. But I respect the dedication the author has put into the story and I get how people like this story some of the decisions made here are not for me but I also do not think they are necessarily bad choices depending on the target audience so I do recommend you to give it a shot there are a lot of chapters and if you end up liking it lots of content for you to enjoy.

When do you think you will release?

The chapters are fast. I give four star because being in the same team as as 7 is a bit too used for me and it is still very early in the story at the time of reviewing. But I do suggest that you tap more into the concept of weapons as I see everyone is focusing on ninjutsu and eight gates nowadays and some fuinjutsu. But never enough of bikujutsu(hope I spelled tight. Stuff like kenjutsu is cool. I think that enlarging shurikens into fuma shurikens and stuff like that.