CandD

CandD

3mth

Commented

Why remove the last chapter?

ch 0 -1 Note

DxD: The Illusion Killer

Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing

CandD

3mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 12 The Occult (2)

DxD: The Illusion Killer

Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing

CandD

3mth

Commented

Thanks for the chapter I'm looking forward to the next one

ch 0 9 Date with a Cute Fallen

DxD: The Illusion Killer

Anime & Comics · BlackMountainKing

CandD

10mth

Commented

Where are the New chapter?

ch 0 1 Chapter–10

One Piece : The Monsterous Dough

Anime & Comics · Lacht

CandD

11mth

Commented

Haki is the ability to sense spiritual energy (Kenbunshoku), use life force (Busoshoku) and dominate enemies (Haoshoku). Chakra is made by molding physical energy you can say in this fanfic that chakra is a derivation of haki, since both types of energy use Vital energy, that way you can create a good explanation of how the protagonist manages to do all these things

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CandD

1yr

Commented

where the PIC?

And on the topic of animals, turns out I can communicate with them, it isn't like they speak words to me, it's more like I just understand what they're trying to say. And apparently, all animals have an instinctual feeling of love towards me (not like you're thinking degenerate). Like a son loves a father, and because of this they listen to my words and try and gain my affection and attention, it's cute watching them try so hard.

Marvel: Father Of Humanity

Movies · The_Slumbering_One

CandD

1yr

Commented

Where are his wand

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CandD

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 0 4 Lightsabers

Force Users in MHA

Anime & Comics · a_BMO

CandD

1yr

Commented

please don't make a harem, this is one of the few fary tail fanfics that doesn't have the harem tag, and I only came here for that reason and also because the story is good. If you are going to make a harem, put the tag

ch 14 After Another Year

Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads

Anime & Comics · SixthSense1029

CandD

1yr

Commented

Meloetta Good for streaming

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Rizzler of Oz

Livestreaming My Pokemon Journey!

Anime & Comics · President_Poverty

CandD

1yr

Posted

well i read as far as i could take it and in short we have a bizarrely mature protagonist he is 16 years old and has no emotions, the original marvel characters were made senseless worse, nick fury who should be the greatest spy in the world talks to a child civil about tseract, loki and shield, his mother when he says he's saving the earth doesn't say anything he just gives an understandable have a good day, nothing makes sense here. The idea of the story is good but the characters are very mocked better rewrite

AML.

Anime & Comics · Travis_Larowe_7952

CandD

1yr

Commented

Lol "hi mom i hot super Powers and i am going to save the earth" "understandable have a nice day" Lol

ch 0 1 (The other guy.)

AML.

Anime & Comics · Travis_Larowe_7952

CandD

1yr

Commented

this is pretty far-fetched, like a normal 16-year-old boy has just discovered S.H.I.E.L.D. one of the world's biggest secrets, and Captain America, who the whole world thought was dead and his first reaction is "I know you", I I don't know much about human feelings but a person would NEVER act like that, remembering that super powers are still not normal at that time, much less a secret agency. I recommend a rewrite of that chapter.

ch 0 1 (Star spangled banner.)