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Thanks for the chapter~

ch 60 Two gods of war arrive, Issei has an idea to kidnap the heroine!

My Inner Voice Heard By Heroines

My Inner Voice Heard By Heroines

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I read the previous version of this novel which author dropped, tbh I also really liked that one and just waited months for it to update, I eventually found this one which is remake and takes a different path than the previous one. Writing Quality: Pleasant- Very few grammar mistakes and a good level of dialogue Update stability: 1 chapter per 2/3 days, hope it is upgraded to 1/day soon Story development: For transmigration MC has to fix an appointment with truck-kun馃槀, he could even reject being transmigrated, the starting is common among transmigration novels, using future knowledge and getting stronger, he transmigrated in his own novel but there are many more things even he doesn't know, adding more mystery to it rather than an all knowing MC who just solves all the problems as they come by. Read till the latest chapter which is 30, so there isn't much story development yet. This novel has a lot of potential and I know author is going to make use of it. Character Design: Our MC isn't perfectly defined till now but I still don't find any negative points in him. The conversations are a bit dull or bland as I would call it, It would be better if it the conversations were more lively with his maid, brothers and elders. World background: Author has kept world background mysteries but it isn't a problem as he doesn't mention those things often and gives the new info at right time. It would be better if author used much more simple and also detailed power system most novels are these days are using. It's a good novel with a lot of potential, I just hope the updates are frequent to keep me hooked to this, definitely give it a try.

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