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I don't mean to scrutinize to heavily here, but...two hundred goblins and he's killing at a rate of three per minute, and in ten minutes "the whole band had been slaughtered" ? ?
Xzavier remembered what was the Kadin had said about the Goblins' intelligence being so low that an ordinary person could defeat them. It turned out that it was true. In about ten minute's time, the whole band had been slaughtered.
Military System In Isekai Of Magic
Fantasy · Taosnothing
"ren" to "Ren"
His thighs slapped against her bubbly butt and it caused it to ripple, which Ren enjoyed very much.
A Superhero Harem? Their love makes me stronger (MHA, OPM, Naruto, OP)
Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
swap the words "was" and "body" so it reads "while her lower body was getting..."
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
I never know if corrections made in the comments are more of a bother to the author, and if they are, please feel free to let me know and I'll stop. Love the work so far.
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
"widely"? Do you mean "wildly"? Also "ren" to "Ren".
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
Pro tip here, do not google "expanding fissure" and look at the images. Also this sentence confounds me.
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
I would change "very" in the sentence to "much" as it will read better.
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
"o for other people." "o" should be "or"
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
"picked" should be changed to "peaked"
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
Adjusted? You mean adjacent?
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
"not" to "note"
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
Since "you're" is a combination of you and are, you should either go with "You are just amazing..." here or simply "You're amazing..."
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
"thought" should be "taught" in this sentence
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
change the "quite" in the sentence to "quit".
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
"Isaki didn't do anything too reckless-" the "didn't" in the sentence should be changed to "don't"
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
spared should be fixed to sparred.
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
Replace Ian with Ren.
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Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
He's a Dhampir: half vampire (father's side) half dark elf (mother's side).
"The Undead King died in his battle with the Dark Queen several years ago, but before he died he used necromancy on himself, and now he is undead so he is immune to poison, physical attacks, ice magic, and wind magic but it is weak against water, light, fire, and holy magic…"
No Otaku with Harem System (English Version)
Anime & Comics · Bukaro
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The Conquerors Path
Fantasy · Chaosking
As if guided by a divine hand, the bullet had pierced through the scrotum of one of the orcs and violently ruptured one of its testicles. Hot searing pain shot through his entire body. As if in sync, he screamed out violently just as the young girl also screamed.
Military System In Isekai Of Magic
Fantasy · Taosnothing