I like how the story's going smoothly because of the way you write it. The flow is smooth, the events overlaps perfectly, the description of sensitive topics are well-written, and the characters' personalities are shown well despite not using flowery words. Keep it up! You're doing great!
I like the pace of the story. It's very refreshing to read a story like this. Keep it up!
Bonus: As a sucker for curse words, I was laughing whenever a character snapped! Gosh, they are so funny.
I like how the story's going smoothly because of the way you write it. The flow is smooth, the events overlaps perfectly, the description of sensitive topics are well-written, and the characters' personalities are shown well despite not using flowery words. Keep it up! You're doing great!