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Good chapter keep them coming

Has this book been dropped?

hold dear

what's going on is this dropped ?

why ruin a decent story with the worst fight scene in history? where did Jon's strength go? his magic? how come Valarian steel can all of a sudden only find gaps in armor instead of cutting through steel like paper in every other fanfiction and the actual book material? Jon's sword should cut right though Robert's hammers and right though his armor.

what's up with Laenathe Valaryion girl did Ciri jump over her or is dude not interested in her. haven't heard anything about her ane her dad is master of ship for mc

good chapter. finally focusing on himself a little bit even though almost forced to do so though

Kaia is way to hyped up. Why would Amon trust her at all because someone told her to teach to pay back a favor and he doesn't even know the person in question or their motives or Kaia's motives for that matter. Why is he so trusting especially if he's in control of his emotions it doesn't make sense. one more thing why is the whole group so accepting and trusting Mabel so much they went on a mission with her once met her 3 times and known her for a week but they act like bff's right away and protect her with their lives

The night with just Julia should be at least this fleshed out it makes her seem like all ashe does is kiss and hold hands

Amon is too good to theses girls especially Ariel and the new chick he needs to be more selfish, especially about resources and less trusting if he really wants to be the strongest

Do we ever get back to the mc or did you just drop it and start a new novel in the middle with a female mc

Really training other dudes with women he's with then trying to actively give away chicks that want him no hot blooded male would ever do that

cuck himself