not gonna lie this was a bit disappointing, well... Very disappointing... it was supposed to be this great moment of destruction and death, a show of the overwhelming power that put humanity at his knees, but how are we supposed to care if the most important characters aren't participating in it? This only works on the original because we experience the events through the eyes of the characters, usually important characters that we've come to care about, the workers, gazef, Enri and Nfirea, Brain Unglaus, Neia Baraja, etc... There is always someone at the center of it all, without them everything just fells hollow, and unimportant... Well that's just my opinion, I hope you take it as constructive criticism, I can't wait to see more of your work you are very talented and I'm loving the story so far, just this last chapter that felt really off and caught me of guard since it was supposed to be an important moment.
ch 27 First Reckoning (Part II)
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not gonna lie this was a bit disappointing, well... Very disappointing... it was supposed to be this great moment of destruction and death, a show of the overwhelming power that put humanity at his knees, but how are we supposed to care if the most important characters aren't participating in it? This only works on the original because we experience the events through the eyes of the characters, usually important characters that we've come to care about, the workers, gazef, Enri and Nfirea, Brain Unglaus, Neia Baraja, etc... There is always someone at the center of it all, without them everything just fells hollow, and unimportant... Well that's just my opinion, I hope you take it as constructive criticism, I can't wait to see more of your work you are very talented and I'm loving the story so far, just this last chapter that felt really off and caught me of guard since it was supposed to be an important moment.
ch 27 First Reckoning (Part II)
Overlord: Supremacy of the Fallen
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