😂😂
Rovenin : " Leave him alone he must be in the middle of counting his sins up until now and regretting them."
Fantasy · callow_dream
Omg! YES PLEASE!!
Ahhh! I already struggle with a fear of the muggle Ocean. If I was a character in HP, I don’t think I would ever be able to tolerate diving into a sea filled with magical creatures!! No way!!
Quinn was staring unblinkingly ahead of him, trying to discern shapes through the darkness... and then, without warning, something grabbed hold of his ankle.
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 361 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 361
Anime & Comics · alex02373
Sooo, I ended up doing a complete revision and editing of the chapter instead of just pointing things out. I changed some lines and fixed some sentences, but overall it's mostly the same thing. Keep in mind that the edit is just a suggestion, and it might not fit with what you have planed for the novel. -------- Now, I have got 3 ways to give it to you. 1: I send it to you on discord or something similar. This is the easiest. 2: I send the entire edited chapter in the comments at the end of the chapters, (but everyone can see these if I don't delete them). or 3: I comment on every paragraph in the chapter. (same problem)
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Crude_Master
Nice! It will be training for me too, so it's a win-win. Then I'll begin commenting in the paragraphs starting tomorrow.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Crude_Master
AH! Author-sama replied to my post! WEEE! Sadly, even though I myself am a small-time writer, I don't have any experience in apps like grammarly or anything like it. Though, if you would like me to, I could revise, comment on, or do small-time editing on the chapters if you would like? I often have mistakes in my grammar when writing, and an outside perspective might help sometimes. Do you prefer that I point something out in the comments if I find any in the future?
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Crude_Master
Hello there dear author-sama🥴 I just found this novel and wanted to say that the synopsis is very well written👌 It is what made me take a look at this novel. The story it described has got a good set-up and a wast potential, so I am looking forward to reading more of it. I like that you kept the prologue short and that it contained slightly more content than the synopsis, a great idea if I might add. Execpt for a few punctuation mistakes and the likes, this first chapter is excellent and I hope you keep releasing more stuff like this🌟
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Crude_Master
Does this mean that you will be posting more chapters in the future again??? I really hope so! This is one of the few novels in my library I paid special attention to, and I was so sad when it stopped uploading. I quite like the humour amd setting of this novel!
ch 0 -1 Rewriting
Fantasy · Tjbeach
Melissa the pioneer!!
Most shocking was the fact that he could see Melissa joyfully humming something as she boiled something over a pot.
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Better start stockpiling phones since Ren is back in town! Hahahaha!
"That's my second phone this week!"
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Pfffttt!! Hahahahaha! Yes! Keep stroking his ego!
For a split moment, I wanted to let her continue.
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
["Congratulation!"] ["Your {Extra Skill:Shamefullness} has reached lvl MAX"]
"Don't worry Leon. I'll do as you say."
Fantasy · Ryukurou
I hope not. -My friend will have my head on a spike if it happens...
ch 0 8 The first month of the School
Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
I just told my friend about this novel, and he is a big COTE fan. If u stop uploading new chapters now, he will have my head on a plate. Sooooooo, here are more PowerStones to keep the story going, and for my head to stay attached to its neck~ ^v^ To a fruitful future relationship~!! To author-san!!!
ch 0 7 Clubs- Part 2
Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
I LOVE how the action of holding hands are CENSORED.😂😂🤣🤣😂🤣
"They are h*lding h*nds!"
Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
"I have been called, I must answer... always."
"Oh ho, Harry Potter..."
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
As long as it’s not as severe as this, all is good🥺👍 Stay safe~
I am sure no one saw me in this shameful act. Whenever I got frustrated or felt embarrassed I started banging my head. One could describe it as neither too hard nor to soft.
Fantasy · Noel_Elitia
Someone didn’t pay attention in class…
' Be it my garden or my pride, how dare you even try to step on it? I'll show you why Esselgarde is a Marquis while Kliethberg is the Duke.'
Mad Hound of Esselgarde
Fantasy · callow_dream