hello I'm not sure how long ago you started writing this but I don't think you should give up on it 😉, It really has a lot of potential with how it's going, however I do recommend to slow down the pace (describe how character may be feeling what the atmosphere around her is like 👍) and then get to the part about the wolf's. sorry if I sound bossy I just think that this could be a really good story 😄
ch 0 1 My family trip into the woods
Fantasy · DaoistN8mZEZ
this book is one of my favourites so far, the plot is so captivating and I really love the protagonists character, can't wait to see what happens next 💖
ch 53 Let me go
Teen · Applelumi
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Webnovel 
hello I'm not sure how long ago you started writing this but I don't think you should give up on it 😉, It really has a lot of potential with how it's going, however I do recommend to slow down the pace (describe how character may be feeling what the atmosphere around her is like 👍) and then get to the part about the wolf's. sorry if I sound bossy I just think that this could be a really good story 😄
ch 0 1 My family trip into the woods
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Fantasy · DaoistN8mZEZ