Alice according to author
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Anime & Comics · LXVE_MuRdxR69
Cuz he immortal we all know this he doesn't age
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Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
"smell ya later" Kinda sus
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Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
She looks like this
The woman was beautiful with blue hair and good proportions she had a cold look in her eyes (Think of esdeath from akame ga kill) while in her arms was a boy who looks about a month old the boy has white hair and in his head there were a pair of white fluffy ears. The baby seems to be asleep.
Fantasy · Abs_playez
I mean a good way to get to a woman's heart is by food.
That means the canon start in two to three months. I also have to bond with them. I am confident in making my relationship to more than a close friend with four of them or even five If I include Yui in my plan after saving her. Only left Mira Yamana and Arin Kannazuki, Mira is hard to talk to so I'll have mellow her down a little, I was also thinking of opening the restaurant downtown near the academy by making the delicious food and feeding the girls will be worth the effort.
Anime & Comics · Abysalyounglord
You sure 'you' used them?
'Anyway, in addition to the ordinary powers of the Douluo Continent, I also inherited Madara's techniques... Last night, I used Fire Style and his Sharingan!'
Anime & Comics · THELASTWORD
Bruh
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Anime & Comics · Navuhodonosr
I don't know about that one chief...
I suppose it's time for me to come in, too much lurking is not good after all. Time to make a gigachad entrance or I wouldn't live up to the reputation of a fanfic protagonist and make a dumb harem of beauties.
Anime & Comics · ImmortalVirgin_0980
I think you should have made it so that Mc learned the language by observing a few people talking in english for a few minutes.
sigh this was a small chapter I know.
Anime & Comics · Master_Cheif
First thing it would be better if you did this in 1st person rather then 3rd person. It just feels weird
this is why mc decided to do the next best thing trap himself in ice not normal ice cosmic ice which can even freeze embodiments who are out of the control of time and space. sure he'll miss shit like meeting eternals or how celestials experiment on humans or even other major stuff but he couldn't care less anymore hes going made from just 10 years how the hell can he go one for millions or even thousands.
Anime & Comics · Master_Cheif
Nice
Level: 121 Strength: 6900 Mana:69420 Speed: 6900 Stamina: 6.9million Points:50
Anime & Comics · Master_Cheif
Ok so you're dropping marvel in this. Wow I am so surprised xD
it has been 10 years since Henry arrived and alot had happened. for example he level 100 more times and almost met Asagardians YES almost met because he decided to stay away and let everything take its course like the original in marvel (well not original cause I changed it but still everything will play like . except for some people's pov).
Anime & Comics · Master_Cheif
Surprise me if you can.
(didnt expect a time skip right neither did I but what's about to happen you wont expect it or maybe you will)
Anime & Comics · Master_Cheif
It's very boring tbh the writing is good, stability of updates is good, story development non existence (bruh he is like "I wanna keep this peaceful life" he doesn't really have one to begin with). If I am being honest a tip I would give you as a reader is that make the first 10 chapters eventful so that you can hook the readers. The only interesting thing I have read is that he fought shiva that's it. Also yes Rias is arrogant but she isn't really stupid. I don't see how she would see him the same as how she saw issei. Plus it's way to easy for the MC like as a reader I don't see him having any troubles anytime soon.
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I think anyone one would get bored after about 2 weeks of having powers like Ren so I don't see how he felt the same excitement for 2 months straight.
'Fuck… maybe I shouldn't have taken this world lightly and kept strolling at night so casually…' (A/N: This is how MC's need to learn about decisions. Not be 'Born' smart and basically a god that makes no mistake Lolz)
Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
bruh this guy just put himself on the pan and in the future Alice will cook him.
"And then there's the third tenet to being a good person. If there is something you want, then you must make sure to acquire it no matter what you have to do."
How to raise a villainess
Fantasy · NuiProductions