Webnovel Author: eudine - Novel Collection

eudine

4mth

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 87 Vanity and ambition intertwine in threads of gold and blood.

[GL] Aurore

Fantasy · moonsside

eudine

8mth

Replied to aoi_hoshi_cath88

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Comments: The patient is malnourished and underweight. The circumstances for this is unknown, but further visits will be needed. The patient also displays signs of insomnia and sleep paralysis, claiming to see a faceless woman with long hair in her dreams.

Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken

Fantasy · eudine

eudine

8mth

Replied to Kaede_Zy

not exactly, but, close guess

As if it read her thoughts, Charlotte's shadow stepped away from her feet for a brief moment, taunting her with words that she could not hear. Yet it rang in her ears as loudly as the holy bells did the day she had been chosen.

Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken

Fantasy · eudine

eudine

8mth

Replied to Kaede_Zy

The voices dug and scraped at the old hag's eardrums like earthworms and tiny millipedes. She spoke like there were a thousand personas trapped within her throat—incongruous whispers—each a different voice and tone from the one before.

Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken

Fantasy · eudine

eudine

8mth

Replied to RyujiSakamata

Kyouhana: The Dark Lord's Bride Offering

Fantasy · RyujiSakamata

eudine

8mth

Replied to Rin_Nurnia

Sitting up from where she lay, the old beldame craned her neck, carefully examining the young lady's face. Despite how she was in her twilight years, the hag's vision was far better than most her age.

Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken

Fantasy · eudine

eudine

8mth

Replied to RyujiSakamata

Thank you so much!

Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken

Fantasy · eudine

eudine

8mth

Replied to pastlife_me

Woahh thank you so much for the kind words!

Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken

Fantasy · eudine

eudine

8mth

Posted

I love how you write! This novel was well worth the time, and it’s a must-read. The author does a good job of depicting the characters and setting, making it easily imaginable. Furthermore, I love how you executed the transmigration—it was rather intriguing, to say the least. The only criticism I have is the odd word choice from time to time, and the mixing of past and present tense. Some of the internal monologue lines also felt a bit rough around the edges, and a bit out of place. Other than that, kudos to you author—keep it up!