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Deeply Racist and terrible grammar, it reads like a typical chinese Novel with racism everywhere. Deeply Racist and terrible grammar, it reads like a typical chinese Novel with racism everywhere.

A good story with a MC who has a full fleshed personality and its written in a style that allows to work with the crossover from the different TV shows without losing quality.

Its a story about a ex prisoner who broke into a villa and caused a acident that hurt a celebrity so much that he cant work anymore and shows no remorse about it. The MC wynt to be a star in Hollywood and because his first try at an audition dont worked he started filming acidents and crime scenes to earn money. I just read till to chapter 20 but he akready broje the law again because he filmed a murder killing and sold the tape to the news because he dont get money by giving it to the police.

Its stealing posting a story from an author without permission even when you dont make money of the story. The original title is Voleur D'âme and not the one you wrote, just delete your stolen content.

A good MC with a realistic background and realistic war politics in his deployment as a soldier. He is very powerful but not like a one punch man. The OC from Marvel have deepth to them abd dont feel like cardboardmen.

Hellor are you a bot or did you not read the comments? On Archive on our own are 67 chapter from the original author, but the author didnt write mor chapter for almost year now.

The writing need change, most of the sentences begin with I or have I in them. It read like writen by a gradschooler. Maybe switch between a first person and a third person narrator while writing.

A good story so for at 9 chapter. I love the system with its sass and funny personality. The OC is not overpowerd from the start and i find it realistic that the Marine try to paint Luffy and Co as the bad guys instead of the Marine Captain.

can you recommend any showbiz storys?

Maybe as punishment because he destroyed his eyes himself. For the clan he destroyed his worth as a ninja they couldnt control him longer. If it would be possible more ninja would change to normal eyes to live free from the seal.