You do sound corny and stupid
Maybe I sound too corny and stupid, and maybe it is an unrealistic ideal… But that's what I want to strive forward to.
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
I thought she gained an extra hundred from sacrificing all those beast cores things. I guess consistency still doesn’t matter.
Worthless MC
We get it. The MC is dumb.
"Huh, I had not thought about it, but I recommend to not do it, already with the special pass you got you will make a fuss, if you bring the new guild there even with the pass, you'll gain the enmity of the other guilds..." Said Aquamarine. "It would be better to go mine the mountain you were using, or go to the more dangerous but freer areas of this mountain in groups. But as long as you're going with your party alone, Maria, you can get in the guild's territory. Is that enough for you to understand?"
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
🤮
"A friend is a friend!" I said, laughing. "You invited us to your house, to eat, and even offered us your services, you bought my potions, you helped us get here… What else can I do to repay you?"
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
🤮
"I see, well, I don't see it being wrong." I said, looking at Helga. "After all, we are already quite close to this people. We have seen Helga's kids and we can't simply say no to you after thinking they might starve if we don't help at the end…" I sighed.
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Another braindead hero type MC who “have” to be so trusting and loyal to every random person that they meet.
I would had probably joined one of the guilds, or even the two of them, but remembering Helga and her family and friends, it would feel bad for me to just abandon them to go the premium guilds…
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Horrible dialogue
"Goofy?! I can get serious too!" I roared back. "Nonetheless, what do you even want, Aquamarine? You're just talking, revealing secrets, and seem just interested in us overall. But what's your endgame?" I asked her directly.
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Unnecessary drama
I hope the MC dies while risking her life to help yet another random person.
"Huh…" I sighed. "Well, what can I do about that? It's your life and it's your choice. I'll protect you with my magic, and we'll find your girlfriend. Might as well help you level up too, later." I giggled.
Reborn As A Ghost: Time To Build My Undead Army!
Fantasy · PancakesWitch