Badges 3
Moments 10
So I would suggest that you reread the chapter I have added more details to it and the mc should be more active than passive like the previous version
ch 0 1 Runied World
Doom's Day
Fantasy · OnlyGemy
It has to be this grand!
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Doom's Day
Fantasy · OnlyGemy
The story's beginning has a good starting point. I can think about 1000 ways to move around it, so it has good room for improvement; the character seems out of place a bit at first, and it was understandable for a human to be king of demons; however, the first few chapters were a bit predictable well we all know what he was trying to achieve here from the get-go love your twist and touch here and there. However, it would take time and a good direction to show up and move forward with a take-off. It is still too early to judge it, at least for me, so I will be back after 70-100 chapters to give it another honest review, but so far, I like what I'm seeing, so I will leave it at 4 stars and keep an eye on it.
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Thanks a ton for the feedback and review, and sorry I didn't reply to you sooner. I was outside my house messing around with chapter 1. It is still in an adjustment phase adding new info and making the mc more alive than generic
ch 0 1 Runied World
Doom's Day
Fantasy · OnlyGemy
where is the map ?
Cutthroat Island (click on the paragraph comment).
Blood Legacy: New World Of Doom
Fantasy · Arkinslize
How A person can Be This Stupid
After trying out many different things according to all the abilities that he had seen before, it turned out that he was unable to perform any of them. He made his way to his bed and sat dejectedly on it.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
thanks for your honest review
Doom's Day
Fantasy · OnlyGemy