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I do not understand how she can steal knowledge from his mind by controlling his body. Are these skills physically imprinted in his body or on his spirit weapon? It would make sense then, if she can activate each skill sort of like a button, but there is no way that she can reasonably steal the knowledge out of someone's mind using this method.
Inala felt knowledge of all the Skills he learnt flow through his palms in the form of Prana and inscribe themselves into the slab of bone, forming a knowledge imprint. Within a minute, the process was done as Granny Oyo retracted her hand.
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope
Agreed. I thought the concept of the novel was neat but I am willing to drop this if the MC continues with this.
"Please excuse me," Inala said respectfully as he entered the living room, all while staring at the ground. He dared not take a risk by staring at her face. Not only was she beautiful, but she also had an explosive body. Coupled with her mature woman's charm and her authoritative countenance, he would instantly become her simp if she leads him on even a little.
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope
I know that the whole theme is elephants, but I hope he doesn't turn into one.
Once the egg is fully refined, it will fuse with the Spirit Container, thereby becoming one with the Mammoth Clansmen, allowing them to transform into the said Pranic Beast. They gain all powers of the Pranic Beast, including its Prana Capacity.
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope
I can see that you intend to write in third omniscient. The problem that I am having, is that you switch POVs with little warning. It breaks my immersion when I’m reading through Inala and out of nowhere, I’m reading in Resha’s mind. It takes me a few seconds to realize that you switched the POV.
Someone he had no knowledge about seemed to know everything there was to him. They didn't exist in his past life. Therefore, it could either be a side effect of his regression or a scheme by some heavenly being. In any case, their existence proved dangerous to him.
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope
These beasts must not have natural predators then. The rear guard is just as important as the front in most cases. You’d usually put the more weak people in the middle so that they are defended on both sides.
The herd of 44 Empyrean Tusks form a straight line as they tread through treacherous lands. The strongest Empyrean Tusk stands at the forefront of the file while the weakest is positioned at the end.
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope
This POV shift is kind of random
'This is a second chance!' Resha came to terms with reality and stared at the class with a determined gaze, 'This time, I'll protect everyone. But first,'
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope
Man do I not like the name of that sutra lol
Of course, Wang Wei will not be alone during these suffering times. Li Jun will also cultivate the [Ten Thousands Things Adapt To One Sutra] in order to try to get a special physique too.
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
Dissecting one of your prime talents and betraying the trust that a disciple of a sect would give towards the top brass is the right direction? I wouldn't want to join a sect where they will dissect me
The future of the sect is going in the right direction.
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
I wouldn't be surprised if the MC is keeping him around as motivation since Han Li would want revenge.
Great Elder Qin Huan answered back: "No, according to the Young Master, Han Li still has certain values in the future. As for what values he was referring to, I have no idea."
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
Doesn’t Wang mean king? The empire is named Great Great empire then.
She slowly took over the foundation that Wang Wei left over and went on many expositions to quell the world. She established her own empire and named it Great Wei Empire to honor her dead husband.
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
I think that this would be too much for the MC at this point in time imo
After spending exactly a hundred year in the Pagoda, the trial ended and the remaining people were sent outside.
Journey of the Fate Destroying Emperor
Eastern · LazySageDao
As much as I can agree with how dumb it was, Varian was grieving and most likely suffering from survivor’s guilt. When you’re in that kind of mind space, you’ll find an excuse to think of yourself as unworthy and bad.
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Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent
Two flashbacks in the first two chapters.
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Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent
What a weird spoiler author. Why would you spoil something like that and lose some of the mystery.
He wanted to save her, even if he died. His eyes were fearless, but oddly enough, his body was frozen.
Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent
Goodbye mom! Your death is necessary for the backstory!
"Varian, go!" He was pushed out of the way and crashed to the ground.
Divine Path System
Fantasy · _Transcendent
With that kind of mindset, shouldn’t he have tried more in the academy? To me, it feels a little hypocritical that he claims this while simultaneously dropping his grades because he got bullied and ignored the offer for that military school. That statement sounds cool, but he doesn’t seem to live up to it imo.
Thus, he would rather give his utmost and make sure that he could die without any regrets, even if that would happen inside the Origin Expanse. He accepted the risk and embraced it tightly.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
The sudden switch in POV was a little jarring
ch 0 5 Alice Zenovia
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
All of the tropes seem Chinese so I am assuming the sword is a jian.
"Give me a thin longsword, please. Double-edge, straight blade, and pointed tip," Michael requested instantly.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain
I was seriously thinking about dropping this. Your comments convinced me to push through with the cringe.
ch 16 Domination and Being Dominated
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope