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Hope this story isn’t abandoned. Please update soon!!

Definitely my favorite story of yours. Hope to see more POVs and their thoughts abt David. Also maybe more narrating the mental hurdles David faces. I mean he had a past life in which he could talk and be normal and now suddenly he can't do any of that. naturally his depression regarding his circumstance would be more severe but maybe controlled. It would be normal for him to repress these thoughts and his sadness but maybe once In a while feel overwhelmed. Like his thoughts on being a burden to his sister as she always has to take care of him and can't live her own life, his thoughts on maybe not being able to fall in love cause he can't talk, other heroes being maybe scared or looking down on him. These are things that you can consider as reasons for his depressive thoughts going forward. A person battling these Demons constantly throughout their journey instead of using one arc to overcome all his challenges seems more realistic. Anyways loving everything so far and can't wait for more!