tortle - Profile

ok definitely harem route...and i like it.

There is no need to display skills every time you show the system status, author. Most of the information was already covered by the two status windows you showed.

Based on your writing, I am guessing you are a high school student aspiring to be an author?

I don't have much hope for character development after reading the first two chapters, which had numerous plot holes. Even talented writers struggle to achieve substantial character growth, so this author is unlikely to succeed. It might be better to have the character undergo a personality change after death.

There are so many plot holes, it seems completely contrived.

bro why not start using grammarly and ai for better writing.

can't he just hide his identity and cover up his face...and use magic however he likes.

because he needs 10 and he doesn't have enough money. He bought a dagger instead because it will help with the returns.

he is already using magic to strengthen his body

although this a like a third rate su yang, I am liking it so far...but please don't forget about the title because he doesn't behave anything like a psychopath which i was here for.

cant agree more... definitely a simp.

you can read this directly...there is no connection between the stories as much as i am aware.

The story is a little slow but i am liking it so far author...also loving the writing style. I hope you won't disappoint 🤞

TDG?

i am not a solo leveling freak, on the other side i actually hate it... and my point was not that if you actually read what i said.

read carefully...he still cant excess inventory because not enough points