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fight alone

just do not drop otherwise I say do it.

welcome back cannot wait for the story.

got you like for my comment hope you are recovering well and stay safe and positive. never give up.

finish here it is where I was reading this Also a person who has it I found something of yours the name is nyawdao3 check it on here.

good chapter and keep it up.

Okay, I'll say this is a good start.But the only thing I recommend instead of having an amantium clause make him get vibranium claws. that way he is different from his dad.

it shows promising read ok but I say keep what you have.

would have do vibranium

dail it back a little. but otherwise focus on the story and add it when plot demands it.

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Condolences for your loss take all the time you need

When you are done with this, can you make another template but based on the bleach anime, it can be basically si who is ichigo brother who has the abilities of gojo From jujitsu kaisen along with Quincy powers. He's a full bringer and he's a Quincy. Instead of soul reapers powers he has those two powers instead.

I like the first one that grams died because that way you can have bonnie be a super dark evil which like josie and orion trying to fight her and bring her back to light. Making Bonnie killed without feeling.

I like the last chapter. Because it's means that he is not in control of everybody's destiny and fate.