Badges 2
Moments 434
That would be forcibly inserted, and I don´t see it. That series is short in development, and apparently on hiatus.
ch 105 Unexpected Help
Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
Anime & Comics · Prognastat
Or he has someone in charge of watching.
ch 103 Pleasant Surprises
Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
Anime & Comics · Prognastat
Upon landing he used his [Illusory Aura] to make him look like a slightly older version of his human self to fool any spiritually aware beings and practice his ability. He ended up deciding to make himself look 23 like he had been at the end of his first life though with the looks of his second life. He gives himself some well-fitted black jeans and a deep purple buttoned shirt.
Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
Anime & Comics · Prognastat
Or
Upon landing he used his [Illusory Aura] to make him look like a slightly older version of his human self to fool any spiritually aware beings and practice his ability. He ended up deciding to make himself look 23 like he had been at the end of his first life though with the looks of his second life. He gives himself some well-fitted black jeans and a deep purple buttoned shirt.
Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
Anime & Comics · Prognastat
Weren´t they already black?
Enel's eyes darted around as he noticed all of the walls of the 'Tower' turning black.
One Piece: Reborn as Enel
Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
I have read every chapter, so I want to leave some comments to improve this fic (that I cherish as one of the bests): 1. You should give a check to the fic to correct the grammar mistakes. Not only mine, but some that have been there for months without fixing (Example: the bottle hero Gunhead). 2. Remember to include situations where the MC needs acumen and strategy outside of combat (like when he had to work alongside Sero). Include canon knowledge if you see that it fits. 3. Give more attention to the rest of the class than a punctual mention. Giving attention only to the main group isolate them and marginalize the rest of the characters.
ch 36 Mock and times*
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"But it was", not "but it was".
Soon, Mina grinned at him with a cheeky giggle, and Kirishima reddened, attempting to play it off. but it was all for nought when she purposefully pressed herself deeper.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
Wish?
She was serious, well, partly. Wish surprised her when she felt Kirishima pull her towards him. "You did a lot of work today, so that's fair."
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"but if I do well", not "but I do well".
'Hah, but I do well then,' her mind wandered to Kirishima, then back to the time they spent at the cinema.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"She", not "He"
"Uh, damn it all!" He leaned back, scratching her hair. "I don't get any of this!"
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"the three cases", not "the two cases".
She ushered him out of the room. Leaving with the two cases, he met Mina by the gates and headed home. She asked about the cases, and he gave a simple explanation.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"the three cases", not "the two cases".
She finished her rambling, kissing the two cases. "But they're heavy to carry!" She rolled them over to Kirishima. "And they're solar powered too."
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"Where´s the gravity chamber?"
"Where's gravity in the chamber?"
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"OFA", not "AFO".
Allmight stood up, showing nothing but gratitude towards the two. The rest of the time was spent advising on how to handle AFO from his experience.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"Shoji", not "Shouji".
"Sounds like some hardcore training," Shouji said through his mask, with Tokoyami nodding in agreement.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"Shoji", not "Shouji".
The pavement gave way beneath his force. Mineta, who was running past, always froze seeing the shadow fly above him, and Yaoyorozu as well. 'What?' Even Shouji.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"Shoji", not "Shouji".
The signal went off, and everyone rushed, Shouji like Sero, extending his duplicate like a grappling hook and going off.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"Shoji", not "Shouji".
"This is an interesting setup. It'll be challenging for the majority of them to traverse; Shouji with his Dupli-Arms can move like Sero." Midoriya went on a rambling session on everyone's factors and how that could help them win.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
"Shoji", not "Shouji".
Anyway, the next group was Kirishima, Tokoyami, Shouji, Yaoyorozu, and Mineta.
To Become Unstoppable
Anime & Comics · LesserCodex
But taking too many liberties is not a good thing either. If you include too many things carelessly, the story loses quality.
ch 105 Unexpected Help
Reborn in bleach as a hollow with a system
Anime & Comics · Prognastat