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we going to soul society

The grammar issues are irksome.

Mc I'd going to die or kidnapped when he levels up, is he dumb?

This Mc wasting time, you need to find stuff to help your aptitude, having a maid is useless.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

It has become a typical protagonist novel where he relies on what the writer to save him.

You say people are cliché , you just acted cliché . I'm going to drop this soon.

Boring chapter, reasons for being impulsive are flimsy.

Not with this cliche protagonist protecting the innocent and the cost of your life trope.

oh my God, this lady is back with the very attractive figure mom to cause more attention .

last 2 chapters grammar hasn't been up to standard.

was wondering why this story isn't popular,now I know.

ah yes , next myaterious powerful people incoming.

Well this story is confusing. Unresolved mysteries and mysterious powerhouses, Mc surviving because. This needs to get a proper story structure.

Should have let them have the key and avoided all of this hassle.

The first simulation of you joining the parliament won't happen because you took the key, you will die at 26 smh. Writer messed up, we going to get plot armour soon.

what's happening? A good life was simulated if he did nothing with the key, he is powerless, why you making him make stupid decisions?

The Liang and Ji have become annoying characters, please remove them.

I miss Fang Lanyun.

MC destroying natural resources for his own stupid gains and acting like a spoilt brat