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Man i wish you could have made english review, i always check for bad reviews first before giving new novel a try. Would have loved to know why you rated it bad.

Sounds like Chatgpt Review

Incredible so far, beyond what you usually find here on Webnovel. Premise amazing! Story? highly engaging! Action and battle scenes? Superb!! The Sauce?....beyond tasty. I can highly recommend giving this wonderful piece of work a try.

A story that had promising start at the beginning but failing to grasp the reader throughout the first 20-30 chapters. Mainly failing due to character engaging with each other in hollow empty way, character actions being described in pretty shallow structure and mc acting in cringy hard to bear behavior taking into account both his lives expierences. "chapter 16" Archer feeling hungry and bringing out two meats scoffing them down. So much more could have been added to describe this. From the typical stomach growling to how the meat was prepared to last him or how it tasted..so on and so forth. This is authors first novel but i hate to take such fact into account to raise a review solely because of this factor alone. The very first couple of chapters are often the dealbreakers for readers, making it even more important for them to be well done.