the comedy almost completely killed my interest in this story
ch 11 DA : Chapter 11: Siblings Reunited II
Book&Literature · Moonhorse
Ok, I really like the beginning and the way you wrote the whole battle, but when it ended I was just disappointed and just skimmed through the rest of the chapters. For me it was unnecessary and completely killed the pleasure of reading. I thought the MC just came in and out of the world, which probably made me dislike this arc. The way he was treated and these interactions with others irritated me a bit and showed me what the rest of the story would look like, which confirmed my belief that it wasn't for me. Anyway, I definitely wrote too much and I have go to sleep because in 7 hours I have to wake up for work. good luck with the story
ch 16 Trigger First Appearance
Video Games · Souleye123
A few thoughts, it was really nice to read until the battle with Zeus, which seemed forced to me, and after that I had a problem getting interested in the story again for a few chapters, but I have a rather positive opinion about the whole thing
ch 53 Spear Boy Playing The Poltical Game
Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story
Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1