"Tehehe! I messed up (Grinned with an innocent)"
Anime & Comics · Astra_D_Satella
The 5 targets were erased from existence. While the instructor looked at her with his jaws dropped.
Anime & Comics · Astra_D_Satella
I want to eat them now! (Cute sob face)
Anime & Comics · Astra_D_Satella
Tomé algunas referencias de otros manga y las introduje en este fanfic.
ch 0 3 The abyss
Anime & Comics · Astra_D_Satella
flying gravity And Dark magic
If you become a magician, what magic would you like to master?
Anime & Comics · LazyTanaka
yes
I wonder if Anya reincarnated too or am i all alone in this world? Am i going to be a loner again.
Anime & Comics · Astra_D_Satella
i will after i am done with exams.
ch 0 7 Sin of Pride
Anime & Comics · Astra_D_Satella
i know it doesnt use the same principle here .i just named it that because i didnt have any cool name.
Aqua magic "Megiddo".
Anime & Comics · Astra_D_Satella
yah but slightly stronger than that.
(Author : No it wasnt mother spider .it was just a spider with 1 evolution below mother spider)
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fixed .I will proofread later
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actually she did have it .It just became a sub feature of ciel
a woman
ch 0 3 Cat fish and Fire dragon
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nah i already know the whole story i just forgot about it since it has been a while and i am writing the novel directly from my memory
ch 0 3 Cat fish and Fire dragon
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i actually forgot about it cause i was focusing on making my own character
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i only putted it there because other reincarnater also had it.hm might need to do some changes to the chapter
ch 0 3 Cat fish and Fire dragon
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Book Title = The last lights War : The fall of the Righteous Rating = 8/10 Plot = Good Story flow = kinda hard to follow. Other wise rating would 10/10. Favorite Chapter : chap 2 Favorite Character : Abel 3 things I liked : 1) The plot is hard to follow but when you understand it it's pretty good. 2) Mc power 3) Power ranking System of the world in the novel. 3 Things I didnt like: 1) I am not into harem and stuff so yah... 2) Also not into romance. 3) story flow is Too quick. Actual review The novel was good. But the story flow is too quick. Unlike other cliche novels where the story and world building takes place step by step , here it's too fast. Over all the story was good. This is just my opinion that I think You explained the novel like you are writing a manhwa and the flow is too quick (Cause you are not seeing any pics just the text)
The Last Light's War: The Fall of the Righteous
Fantasy · Yinghuo_392